Because I can.
Because I am indeed feeling bold.
Because the opportunity presents itself
And I would be a fool to let it pass.
Because I have always written
Will always write
But don’t always learn.
Because friends, feedback, teachers and editors
Don’t appear every day.
And so I begin.
Re-working old poems.
In hopes of seeing words anew.
Or rather
New uses for old words?
Succumbing
The water lures me
As she has so many times before
Now emerging
Discreet
As a delicate muse in the woods
Her hollow voice tempting
In a distant primordial song
Of silver coins tossed from teasing fingers
Her sweet smell and silky sway and wave
Taunting down the mountainside
Am I no more than a voyeur
Standing safely out of reach
Dry on her precarious banks
Enthralled
While she takes no heed of me
I am but a hunched form
A leaning tree
Casting shade across her face
As her struggle to keep fluid
Ebbs and flows
In thickening waters below
And if I stand here long enough
Will I see her freeze
Watch her facade relinquish
To the static state of
Solid water
Love the photos, Gin!
Thank you, Karen. Hope you are feeling better!
What a lovely photo. Your poem drifted my thoughts to the Merced River just outside Yosemite at Hite’s Cove Trail. I could sit for hours watching her toss silver coins from teasing fingers.
really like the rhythm and changed perspective in the photography – and the way it speaks to the changing of perspective we bring to writing that has passed through time – that is fun!
also really like the change up of rythmn at
Her sweet smell and silky sway and wave
Taunting down the mountainside
a great feeling of movement … thank you… inspires me to do new writing :)